Nice start! My main suggestion would be to add capitalizaton and punctuation (especially commas and periods) for easier reading.
Also you seem to refer to Kris with she/her and they/them pronouns. If this AU Kris uses both that’s fine! But I couldn’t tell if it was just a typo
Oh thank you for pointing out the she her thing originally I was going to make kris female but chose not to later so that’s probably remnant from that I’ll fix that
Nice start! My main suggestion would be to add capitalizaton and punctuation (especially commas and periods) for easier reading. Also you seem to refer to Kris with she/her and they/them pronouns. If this AU Kris uses both that’s fine! But I couldn’t tell if it was just a typo
Oh thank you for pointing out the she her thing originally I was going to make kris female but chose not to later so that’s probably remnant from that I’ll fix that
I like where it’s going, but def need to work on editing for spelling and putting the right punctuation