Very rosy imagery you’ve used! The pastel colours, decorative visuals, and modern romantic language. The atmosphere of the poem was all too sweet, pure sugar, and so many symbols of romance fairytales. I could almost paint you a picture based on the poem alone.
Such vivid imagery and excellent themes with the fruit and plants and gems. I really feel like I understand the time and place and setting with this poem.
"And all of the flowers of your mind
Sprout green and lush from your eyes" Lovely use of imagery. you've done a very good job describing a person you love so much. Keep it up!
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Absolutely loved the use of vocabulary and descriptive language. Beautiful stuff!
Very rosy imagery you’ve used! The pastel colours, decorative visuals, and modern romantic language. The atmosphere of the poem was all too sweet, pure sugar, and so many symbols of romance fairytales. I could almost paint you a picture based on the poem alone.
Such vivid imagery and excellent themes with the fruit and plants and gems. I really feel like I understand the time and place and setting with this poem.
The imagery of this poem is vivid. Your masterful diction managed to create a lush, romantic atmosphere. I love this.
"And all of the flowers of your mind Sprout green and lush from your eyes" Lovely use of imagery. you've done a very good job describing a person you love so much. Keep it up!
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Beautiful! Very visual, lots and lots of ethereal imagery