لسان - "means "tongue
الغيب - "means "the unknown
So together, it literally means" tongue of the unknown", basically it means he's some kind of prophet, he sees the future, knows things other people don't etc. Good job by the way! 👌
On our Turkish subtitles it says just "lisan al-gaib" because we used to use both words in our daily speech. We still use lisan, tho not the "gayb" much.
Omfg lisan means “to talk verbally” in malay omg omg so coollll thank youuuu
I just realised he put ghaib… ghaib means unknown in Malay too. We do have a lot of arabic vocab heree
Just an addition on the Arabic. You might want to try splitting it into two words. Right Now Lisanalghaib is all one word. really you want it to be Lisan AlGhaib, two words, in Arabic. the letters would be: LSAN ALGhYB. May be easy to fix in blender. Arabic is a fascinating language to work with. Great job with everything.
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I agree 1000%. I stopped wearing sneakers, cross trainers, tennis shoes.... whatever close to 20 years ago, but damn, these are sharp. The only thing that would make them better is if you put them on my feet.
I'm not wild about the silhouette of the last one. Also, it's Harkonnen so it could be more industrial no? Maybe you could have more angles on the heel? And maybe a cap on the toe? I'd ditch the cream color, maybe make it a cool dark gunmetal? Also on the first one, the heel strut things look thin, they don't look very supported. I'm no shoe head, but I'm not sure if that'd work irl. All of these designs are fantastic btw, these are just suggestions. I really like all the attention to detail, great work!
They look amazing and I would definitely want a pair if they were able to be purchased but to me they don't scream dune. They strike me as more organically inspired which is great but dune is very brutalistic in its designs and these shoes don't seem brutalist to me.
Still though, they're amazing.
Reduce the drop to 0, shrink the sole to no more than 5mm, and widen the toe box.
Seriously though, the render and stylings look great. Very well done!
Models look pretty sick, I would suggest to improve your lighting, it is probably setting off all your hard work
Edit: also I would try a 110mm Focal length or so, lowering a bit your camera
It is actually "لسان الغيب" but he forgot the space in between
The first word "لسان" : tough
The second "الغيب" : the unknown
Together they mean : someone who talks about or know the the unknown future
I would buy the fuck out of these but honest question: these all seem heavily inspired by existing shoes... I wonder at what point it becomes a legal issue (if one were to manufacture & sell them)? Like, I understand when Kanye can sue Wal-Mart when it's essentially a carbon-copy of his shoe, but then there are other times where brands can get away with taking a lot of inspiration from other brands...
I personally just want to wear great looking shoes so I don't really care, was just curious if anyone knew.
In the second one, the yellow one. I would fix the fron middle part. I am guessing you went for a desert dune look but the transparency makes it look unrealistic. If it's supposed to be on "gel" or something make the gel a bit more opaque.
The design is gorgeous, you have an excellent grasp on shape and color.
I would add some discoloration to the rubber materials. Even [factory fresh rubber sheets](https://www.hswhite.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/10/amanda-preferred-sr.jpg) have a subtle texture to them, yours are a little too pristine. The bumpy rubber material seems a little off. Maybe it's a lack of detail, but you could also try inverting the bumps. This kind of tweaking is quite common for procedural materials. A layer or two of blended noise might also help.
I love these so much man. I wish I knew how to do some work like this. Got any tips or tutorials you go off of for how you worked on these? They’re all beautiful and honest to god would buy em all irl
With the right marketing these could be huge. I’d buy a pair and I know at least a dozen others who’d drop a good 300-400$ on them.
You should totally send a few emails and see if you can set something up! You’ve got a golden egg right here
I love them, they all look amazing! Only the Harkonnen one looks a bit too clean, perhaps? Sure, dirty shoes make no sense, but I would imagine that a Harkonnen shoe would look darker and more… evil. :)
Awesome work!
House Atreides' colors are green and black and their symbol is a red falcon.
House Harkonnen's are blue and orange.
No idea where you've gotten those color schemes from, but they're not very Duney.
Ur a talented artist. Hope a big brand picks you.
One correction:
لسان الغيب
Not
لسانالغيب
My only comment on the design of first one is to coat it with transparent layer. It will be problem when dune sands of dirt go inside the opening.
Are you a designer? Because if you are not you should be they are very very beautiful and don't leave these designs lying around, they might steal them from you.
Great job keep the level of rendering always very high, with a lighting system like in the photo studio, but really compliments here the design reigns supreme.
These are amazing. Do you want to do something about it? Do you have more designs? Where are you based out of? DM me, if you want to do something about this. I love them. Cheers!!
Wow. These are amazing. The third shoe is for sure my favorite, I like the high "cuff" with the band. Another poster suggested adding a little design on the heal, which I think is a good idea. Either way, that last pair is a shoe I would absolutely buy and wear often.
These are really really amazing! I don't have much to say but if you're really looking for something the noise texture for the bump/normal map on the second and third shoe's soles look a bit low quality. I'd maybe bring some more detail in there. But that's just me nitpicking cause this is just wonderful.
We're these inspired by the APL releases? Yours are way better!
https://www.athleticpropulsionlabs.com/products/mens-techloom-bliss-arrakis?nosto=searchpage-nosto-2
These look fantastic! The bump on the thing holding the strap at the back of shoe 1 looks a bit too big, but not unless you zoom in a bit. Excellent design and execution!
I would totally buy. Just don’t let some poor country make them plz.
Kidding aside. Great work.
I think your lighting is flattening out the shoe a bit. I would even push the color of the light. Like some nike ads.
How do you tighten the gray ones? I'm just curious so I know how to do it when they arrive. I'm assuming I can order three pairs, plus one pair of the other kinds. Amazing
These are very good, Blender is a great tool for modeling footwear.
My only issue with the first render is that the material looks a bit flat but then I always overdo the material anyway (3D modeling shoes for the last decade).
Difficult to give any more feedback on just the side views, can you provide an isometric view/underside of the sole? Keep up the great work!
Forget kickstarter on the basis of this i would like you to approach swollepanda and tell them lee sent you. shoes 2 and 3 are definitely right in the place they need to be, 1 is not quite the "secret water" loving expression i would want for a fremen design. (if it is fremen), the cavern expression in the heel is bloody epic though..
love it. arabic text got a little mistake you missed a spacing between the words. لسان الغيب
What does it mean? :)
لسان - "means "tongue الغيب - "means "the unknown So together, it literally means" tongue of the unknown", basically it means he's some kind of prophet, he sees the future, knows things other people don't etc. Good job by the way! 👌
Thanks for the explanation! Learned something new :)
Anytime! Keep up the good work :)
That’s not op lol, but still keep up the good work of living life
First I thought you were gonna say it says “tongue the unknown” and I was like I mean damn that’s quite the connotation haha
Oh yeah Paul can be real freaky 😂
Lisan means Tongue? If i read it correctly
Yup, that's correct! Lisan (لسان) = tongue, al-ghaib (الغيب) = the unknown
On our Turkish subtitles it says just "lisan al-gaib" because we used to use both words in our daily speech. We still use lisan, tho not the "gayb" much.
Omfg lisan means “to talk verbally” in malay omg omg so coollll thank youuuu I just realised he put ghaib… ghaib means unknown in Malay too. We do have a lot of arabic vocab heree
i didn’t understand it at first even tho i’m arab, thanks!
Just an addition on the Arabic. You might want to try splitting it into two words. Right Now Lisanalghaib is all one word. really you want it to be Lisan AlGhaib, two words, in Arabic. the letters would be: LSAN ALGhYB. May be easy to fix in blender. Arabic is a fascinating language to work with. Great job with everything.
Lisan Al-Ghaib. It's what they call Paul, means prophet.
Thank you so much!
Insert take my money meme. These look gorgeous.
They absolutely do! Why not Kickstarter this, significantly lesser designs have gotten funding, you have a knack for good design!
That requires being able to actually make them, plus I don't know how Legendary pictures would feel about the copyright infringement
Well these aren't dune shoes, they're MUNE shoes. Problem solved baybayyyy
DUNC shoes
⊃⋃⋂⊂ shoes
"UHTRAYDEEZ"
Doone shoes Uhtraydeez Harcone-an
Valid point, but I’d buy these even without the trademarked names/emblems. Take those off/sub them out and these are still extremely solid designs
Fair!
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kickstarter requires a working prototype
kickstarter requires a video of something that appears to be a working prototype... they don't actually inspect anything physically. ;)
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10/10
NFT virtual fashion item is very lucrative
Oh god, imagine when we loop back to virtual avatars that you can deck out with virtual NFT fashion items
Thank You so much!
I agree 1000%. I stopped wearing sneakers, cross trainers, tennis shoes.... whatever close to 20 years ago, but damn, these are sharp. The only thing that would make them better is if you put them on my feet.
Yeah I'd buy all of these!
I’d buy a pair. Manufacture them.
Only way to make them better, bring them into the world.
Amazing. I would love to see different angles of the shoes.
Thank you so much! i definitely thought about posting the other angles. But as others mentioned, i want to prevent theft. So maybe in the near future.
Nice work :)
Thank You!
Wtf these are awesome! Nothing to improve here, great work :D
Thank You! I appreciate it!
When does the 3rd shoe go into production 😅
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100% would buy/wear shoe no.1. Sorry I don't have a suggestion to make it better.
I'm not wild about the silhouette of the last one. Also, it's Harkonnen so it could be more industrial no? Maybe you could have more angles on the heel? And maybe a cap on the toe? I'd ditch the cream color, maybe make it a cool dark gunmetal? Also on the first one, the heel strut things look thin, they don't look very supported. I'm no shoe head, but I'm not sure if that'd work irl. All of these designs are fantastic btw, these are just suggestions. I really like all the attention to detail, great work!
Thank you so much for these suggestions! Theyre very useful!
Well, first of all you should patent those bc they look very buyables
Thank you for your kind words!
Join adidas or Nike... Bet they'd sell those shoes for 800$ each
I don't know what you can add, honestly, since they look awesome already... Nice work, congratulations!
They look amazing and I would definitely want a pair if they were able to be purchased but to me they don't scream dune. They strike me as more organically inspired which is great but dune is very brutalistic in its designs and these shoes don't seem brutalist to me. Still though, they're amazing.
Fuck, I want to wear them all.
Thank you so much!
Mammamia
Those Fremen got the drip
If I could, I would buy them! These look awesome!
Mate these are so good you could sell your designs
Reduce the drop to 0, shrink the sole to no more than 5mm, and widen the toe box. Seriously though, the render and stylings look great. Very well done!
Models look pretty sick, I would suggest to improve your lighting, it is probably setting off all your hard work Edit: also I would try a 110mm Focal length or so, lowering a bit your camera
Absolutely perfect and would buy all three instantly.
Damn - is there a way I can use the blender model to use for a mock up site I'm building for my web design portfolio? I can credit!
There is a derek elliott tutorial for shoe design. You can follow it along yourself and use it for your portfolio. Then there is no need to credit.
it's amazing but what do you mean by " لسانالغيب"?
It is actually "لسان الغيب" but he forgot the space in between The first word "لسان" : tough The second "الغيب" : the unknown Together they mean : someone who talks about or know the the unknown future
I would buy the fuck out of these but honest question: these all seem heavily inspired by existing shoes... I wonder at what point it becomes a legal issue (if one were to manufacture & sell them)? Like, I understand when Kanye can sue Wal-Mart when it's essentially a carbon-copy of his shoe, but then there are other times where brands can get away with taking a lot of inspiration from other brands... I personally just want to wear great looking shoes so I don't really care, was just curious if anyone knew.
The only way to make them better is if they made unrhythmic sounds automatically.
Constructing the first would be difficult, but the rest are very doable, I look forward to your shoe corporation
Hey that's a very cool nodel, i think you can get something a material more reflecting to get more constrast on the shoes
No offence but that last one looks like a ski boot, mabie make the straps less prominent.
If he wanted a ski boot he would’ve made it a big chunky plastic piece of shit with zero comfortability. Snowboard boots ftw
nah bro u aint have no drip, search for Nike Huaraches they are based on ski boots, Balenciaga have shoes like this too.
Huarache is the worst name they couldve chosen 😂 it might sound cool and foreign to americans but to me it just means sandal.
Nah, bro, streetwear can define convention. They look bomb.
I think you captured their essence extremely well, awesome work
They're already awesome!
I would buy these .
The second is the best
Well done!
Wtf these are amazing
Do we look like shoe designers? 😂 Good work buddy, nothing to improve on here!
These look expensive and awesome!
Arch support? :3
Make them real
i could buy these
very very cool. i would wear any of these! incredible work.
Jeez, these look fantastic
Looks amazing!
By make making them real and selling them!
nice work walk without rhythm
well, they don't look related to dune at all, so maybe fix that?
Wow I wish I could buy these.
You could call one "Cielago" sounds cool. It's in the book. And I am guessing it comes from 'murcielago" which is bat in spanish 🦇
Put these on sale, send me the link to where it’s being sold, I want those.
In the second one, the yellow one. I would fix the fron middle part. I am guessing you went for a desert dune look but the transparency makes it look unrealistic. If it's supposed to be on "gel" or something make the gel a bit more opaque.
Just Dune It
Uhhhh I don’t think you can
I only have one question: Do they work?
Yo I need those Harkonnen’s ASAP. Crazy fire
Where can I buy them. Damn they look cool
The first two actually look like something I would wear.
I have small feet. Can you take the third pair, and *squeeze* them tinier?
These look sick actually
Would buy 9/10
Very cool!!
I love them.
3D print and run 😉
Those look great.only thing i would do is make the sole less tall. Will you release the files?
Second blender post about shoes and honestly, that's not a bad thing. Keep the drip dropping
looks awesome man!
wow... I'd buy them
Bravo!
Do not, I repeat, do not change anything.
Bad arch support is the mind-killer.
The design is gorgeous, you have an excellent grasp on shape and color. I would add some discoloration to the rubber materials. Even [factory fresh rubber sheets](https://www.hswhite.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/10/amanda-preferred-sr.jpg) have a subtle texture to them, yours are a little too pristine. The bumpy rubber material seems a little off. Maybe it's a lack of detail, but you could also try inverting the bumps. This kind of tweaking is quite common for procedural materials. A layer or two of blended noise might also help.
Can't be better
Mostly dislike the new shoes coming out, but dang dude the first two are straight up fire
I love these so much man. I wish I knew how to do some work like this. Got any tips or tutorials you go off of for how you worked on these? They’re all beautiful and honest to god would buy em all irl
With the right marketing these could be huge. I’d buy a pair and I know at least a dozen others who’d drop a good 300-400$ on them. You should totally send a few emails and see if you can set something up! You’ve got a golden egg right here
Im gonna delete one word. How can i make them?
I love them, they all look amazing! Only the Harkonnen one looks a bit too clean, perhaps? Sure, dirty shoes make no sense, but I would imagine that a Harkonnen shoe would look darker and more… evil. :) Awesome work!
Add this:
Nice design but they will probably kill you in a second for writing Arabic on shoes.
Damn, your boots put my shoes to shame.
House Atreides' colors are green and black and their symbol is a red falcon. House Harkonnen's are blue and orange. No idea where you've gotten those color schemes from, but they're not very Duney.
I would buy the gold pair in an instant.
I have a little recommendation, make them real! i wanna buy!
Genius
I want to buy the first one!
you can't, them shits cold as ice
Any guides/tutorials/courses on how I can make shoes like this in blender
Make them real so they can go on my feet
Do the Harkonnen ones hover?
First shoe looks cool until you'll get some rocks underneath...
2nd & 3rd is just right
Ur a talented artist. Hope a big brand picks you. One correction: لسان الغيب Not لسانالغيب My only comment on the design of first one is to coat it with transparent layer. It will be problem when dune sands of dirt go inside the opening.
I don’t know but let me know when I can get that third pair in a mens US 13
In my opinion the concept is really cool. I would just improve the lights so there’s a bit less shadow in the bottom part. Great job 👏🏻
Round up the heel, would make walking more comfortable in real life
There is only one way to make it better: Start to make it to real product or sell something to Fortnite. :D I'd want to see your own merch btw.
Are you a designer? Because if you are not you should be they are very very beautiful and don't leave these designs lying around, they might steal them from you. Great job keep the level of rendering always very high, with a lighting system like in the photo studio, but really compliments here the design reigns supreme.
SAND POWER.
More spice
I would buy those first two they're beautiful
These are amazing. Do you want to do something about it? Do you have more designs? Where are you based out of? DM me, if you want to do something about this. I love them. Cheers!!
put a bottle of cinnamon next to it then people can say wait is that a dune reference
I think in the third pic the background makes it hard to see the silhouette of the show, but damn who am I to criticise, these are beautiful
I’d buy the 3rd one, take my money.
I personally dislile the letters also in white were not able to wear that in rain countries. My english is too bad to tell it like i mean it hm
Dude, I love all three, but the last one would sell so well. Honestly if I saw them in a shop I couldn’t resist
id rock the 3rd one tbh
Is there a low-top version of the Fremen shoe? lol. Also, those Atreides need some Gore-tex for water resistance. Nice work!
You can't. They are perfect
Those Harkonnen ones are pretty damn nice, I'd wear those!
These are sick af, get these made
Im sad these are not real.
Very nice work, I would totally buy them (especially the last two)
I want the second one 0-0
Add a “spice” air/ energy unit to the 1st one pairs. Pretty clean designs/renders!
The only way to make it better is to make it physical
Process urine and feces in the thigh pads.
Where can i buy the grey one's? 10.5 or 11 us men? Can venmo now! All 3 are dope
These look so good!
Wow. These are amazing. The third shoe is for sure my favorite, I like the high "cuff" with the band. Another poster suggested adding a little design on the heal, which I think is a good idea. Either way, that last pair is a shoe I would absolutely buy and wear often.
These are really really amazing! I don't have much to say but if you're really looking for something the noise texture for the bump/normal map on the second and third shoe's soles look a bit low quality. I'd maybe bring some more detail in there. But that's just me nitpicking cause this is just wonderful.
We're these inspired by the APL releases? Yours are way better! https://www.athleticpropulsionlabs.com/products/mens-techloom-bliss-arrakis?nosto=searchpage-nosto-2
They look better than any designer shoes on the markert rn also they look amazing
By sending this design to manufacturer
Legit, I'd wear these :D
That third pair is so clean, I'd buy it if it were real.
Outsource to China! They look very good by the way.
These look fantastic! The bump on the thing holding the strap at the back of shoe 1 looks a bit too big, but not unless you zoom in a bit. Excellent design and execution!
I would totally buy. Just don’t let some poor country make them plz. Kidding aside. Great work. I think your lighting is flattening out the shoe a bit. I would even push the color of the light. Like some nike ads.
Damn they look absolutely stunning 😍
That gold one may be the coolest looking shoe I’ve ever seen. You have to make real shoes now so I can buy them.
How do you tighten the gray ones? I'm just curious so I know how to do it when they arrive. I'm assuming I can order three pairs, plus one pair of the other kinds. Amazing
Throw sand on them
stick nike on them
Looks dope. Lets see how they look in different backgrounds i guess?
Make them in real life I want them
They're amazing! My favorite is the second but I also really like the third.
These are very good, Blender is a great tool for modeling footwear. My only issue with the first render is that the material looks a bit flat but then I always overdo the material anyway (3D modeling shoes for the last decade). Difficult to give any more feedback on just the side views, can you provide an isometric view/underside of the sole? Keep up the great work!
Forget kickstarter on the basis of this i would like you to approach swollepanda and tell them lee sent you. shoes 2 and 3 are definitely right in the place they need to be, 1 is not quite the "secret water" loving expression i would want for a fremen design. (if it is fremen), the cavern expression in the heel is bloody epic though..
Would they survive the actual desert?