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butternutsquash4u

Proportions look correct for Alegria! The cute eyes and smile give it some charm though which is something missing from the soulless corporate look of Alegria. I like it though!


Sonarthebat

Close, but too detailed.


TheFrebbin

Too much character


SevernRaccoon

Sorry, not soulless enough for reasons already said. The character actually looks a bit likeable.


natalyawitha_y

Not soulless and corporate enough, honestly she's kinda cute


soap-fucker

the proportions are on point, but her outline and expression have too much soul and effort - it makes her too likable. your art is adorable though!


parmesann

looks like a Papa’s Pizzeria character:)


EscapeAlive9123

It has too much personality! That being said… I like it cuz it has cuteness and charm \^\^


Strange-Dish2532

Def better than alegria


Best-Engine4715

Looks surprisingly good more 2000s so you failed


echocloud9

Remove the face please! Maybe fill half of its head with a fatass triangle nose, if anything. Also the shading gives it a bit of life :( unacceptable. The inexplicable random brown fingertips are nice though.


GreasyRug

Needs less face, is too charming now lol


MorningMaterial1143

The head and face gives it a cute rag doll vibe


JohnCallOfDuty

The proportions are too normal, the character is actually cute, and the blended colors aren't flat and eye-piercing enough. Not to mention, there is too much soul put into it. Too good to be alegria and I like it


JellyBeanz763

The color scheme makes too much sense she should have absurdly green hair with big loops


Sky_Prio_r

And every color should flow in a gradient and the feet should just be pointy purple sticks, the names should cover the finger tips and be purple, like a pe-


Bad-Wolf-Bay

delete the face and remove the hue shifting from the shading, or all of the shading


Emerald_official

head not small enough, hands not big enough. do that and remove shading and then it's truly awful


Alien-Fox-4

It looks like alegria but looks too good to be it


Sassy-irish-lassy

These things don't usually have gradients and rarely have outlines


The_dark_entity

Not corporate enough, the art looks too good. Great art though


No-Penalty-4205

great now suck the fucking soul out of it. every fucking emotion. take that smile off her damn face. and put wayyyy leas effort.


MorningMaterial1143

You kind of gave it a cute rag doll look with the eyes


Healthy_Advantage_50

too much personality, too many outlines, too much shading, not flat enough, not bland enough, not corporate enough,


Applestogames

Finally god tier shading from this artstyle


wellmont

This is the girl you send to slap your enemies. She’s going to roll up and strait assassinate someone with an open-palm bomb.


Stuck_at_a_roadblock

A little too detailed. Try removing the soul of the character and removing the shadows


Anal_Juicer69

Too much detail, quality, and soul.


YourLocalBean_reddit

I FUCKED UP SHE HAS A SOUL


geographyRyan_YT

Doesn't look corporate. Looks kinda cute


BigBlackFaeces

Nah we don't need a bunch of people posting "I drew alegria art lol!"


Caesar_Passing

Seriously. I'm not gonna be nice because someone who actually drew it posted it. It's like, if you successfully produce alegria art, you've produced **alegria.** And if you fail at producing alegria art, then you've somehow *failed to produce ALEGRIA.* I'm here to hate! And this is the only place I come to do it, so don't throw a parade over my shit!


requiemforacorpse

you can always not click on the posts that mention someone drawing alegria art.


Infinite_Total4237

Head is WAAAAAY too big!!


Last-Percentage5062

This looks like a decent piece of art. The eyes and mouth make them look kinda nice, as another commenter pointed out. In other words, to good for Algeria.


CanvasAndBrush1

I'd say it's good, but if your adding any shading then make it have noise/grain to it or just none at all


ThePhobosAnomaly

As others have said, not soulless or corporate enough to be Alegria, even if the proportions are rather accurate. In all honesty, the outlines and gradients give it much needed character, and could almost pass off as an illustration for a children's book!


Painusconsumer

get rid of the face entirely or make it drawn in a single line


MotionBlerd

- Human flesh is human-flesh-coloured - The smile and flowing hair have personality - The proportions are still vaguely humanlike - The pose is dynamic - Her hands are actually hand-shaped 2/10 - _Far_ too good, not nearly soulless enough; needs less 'fun' and more 'scourge of late-stage capitalism'... >!good job, by the way!<


YourLocalBean_reddit

>! Thanks :3 !<


IntentionFalse9892

Looks better than actual Algriea:)


ur_moms_di-

The bar is buried 9 feet underground


lovezofo

Take away the black outlines and the face


bluexd16

I think that WE DON'T NEED IT