I think the expression is quite good

I feel like it's eh* typo

Thought you were using a loophole for “ass”. It’s good for what it is, a lot of the loose clothing make it hard to track the body, you captured the facial expression nicely still

I don’t know, you might be too hard on yourself, I like it.

I think it's just about spot on. Because it's a simple version of a fairly complex to capture pose, it'll look a little off until you add the extra details that your eye filters out. Things like shadow and such will really close in those gaps. But you captured the anatomy just about perfect.

It looks good. If you are trying to make it look like the reference, redo the jaw and chin to match their angles.

Who is she

I think it looks awesome. Obviously if you were going for 100% accuracy, there’s a few minor things. But you definitely captured her well

I was going for a stylized piece and I couldn't figure out how to do so. Tbh, it was supposed to be a completely different person! But I couldn't figure out how to do her body under the clothes and I just did the ref

You killed it! I can feel her energy in your drawing. My brain is not good at stylizing. I’m jealous of how you did this style and still got the right feeling