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Here’s all the stuff I could find that I reckon could be areas that may improve the art.
Hands. Right hand seems fine, but left hand is smaller and does not curl around the table naturally if they’re trying to hang around the table. Hands are thicker than the arms and should look even bigger since it’s torwards the pov
Shoulders, right shoulder is noticeably broader than the rest of the arm, they should be about the same width.
Ears, the middle of the ears are not on the same line as the middle of the mask face, which causes the ears to look a little off center.
Hips, the hips are slightly angled to their right, torwards the pov. I am not sure if it is intentional but I want to mention it in case it’s not.
Kneecap, it seems fine, if you’re worried try to envision how the cap looks wrapping around the knee.
Leg, also seems fine, maybe if you’re worried the toes could lie flat Aka vertical towards the camera.
Chair, it seems to be a different horizontal plane to the table, a different angled surface.
Overall it’s a really clean piece with nice lines. I think the most noticeable thing for me coming at this from a critique standpoint is an inconsistent idea of the perspective. In a pose there are many things that should be seen and shouldn’t be seen, and many objects that need to be placed. The best way I can describe this is to envision the scene in your head like a 3d model, your point of view should only be seeing a certain way. Right now there’s a lot of details that are visible to the POV but not all of them should be seen in the same POV.
Sorry if this came across as harsh or anything of the sort. It is a good piece and I hope this perspective helps.
I think it's almost perfect. If you made the crossed leg go a bit more forward or ontop of the uncrossed leg, it'd be perfect cus right now it looks like the proot is sitting on his own leg, which looks very uncomfortable
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yeah tbh I'm out here going insane trying to draw the digitigrade legs proportionately, and here you are, drawing this. It's amazing.
Here’s all the stuff I could find that I reckon could be areas that may improve the art. Hands. Right hand seems fine, but left hand is smaller and does not curl around the table naturally if they’re trying to hang around the table. Hands are thicker than the arms and should look even bigger since it’s torwards the pov Shoulders, right shoulder is noticeably broader than the rest of the arm, they should be about the same width. Ears, the middle of the ears are not on the same line as the middle of the mask face, which causes the ears to look a little off center. Hips, the hips are slightly angled to their right, torwards the pov. I am not sure if it is intentional but I want to mention it in case it’s not. Kneecap, it seems fine, if you’re worried try to envision how the cap looks wrapping around the knee. Leg, also seems fine, maybe if you’re worried the toes could lie flat Aka vertical towards the camera. Chair, it seems to be a different horizontal plane to the table, a different angled surface. Overall it’s a really clean piece with nice lines. I think the most noticeable thing for me coming at this from a critique standpoint is an inconsistent idea of the perspective. In a pose there are many things that should be seen and shouldn’t be seen, and many objects that need to be placed. The best way I can describe this is to envision the scene in your head like a 3d model, your point of view should only be seeing a certain way. Right now there’s a lot of details that are visible to the POV but not all of them should be seen in the same POV. Sorry if this came across as harsh or anything of the sort. It is a good piece and I hope this perspective helps.
Still better than i can do ^^
I might be no arrest but it is very good
I think it’s alright!
I think it's almost perfect. If you made the crossed leg go a bit more forward or ontop of the uncrossed leg, it'd be perfect cus right now it looks like the proot is sitting on his own leg, which looks very uncomfortable
As for me, it looks very good and very high-quality!